- A few people mentioned that my font doesn't quite fit the genre. One person said that the font looks too 'cutesy' while another said it looks too 'nice'. I need to further research into fonts appropiate for my trailer.
- A few more people suggested doing something extra with the little girl and older girl screaming, such as prolonging the scream throughout a few more scenes or echoing it throughout the entire montage scene.
- My teacher, who I did not record, suggested re-filming the small montage clip of a knife with some blood over it, to suggest that it was involved in the murder and to continue the theme of red throughout the trailer.
Sunday, 28 October 2012
Interim feedback 2
Here is a video of a few people giving me Interim Feedback about my trailer so far.
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